Rough Cut Feedback

1. How effective do you think our use of istopmotion is?

• They all siad it was very effective and worked well with the narrative

2. What advice can you give that would make it stand out more?

• They thought it stood out already but needed extra dimentions such as more camera angles and different backgrounds
• They also said that lip sinking could be a possibility to make it more impressive

3. Do you think following the narrative is efective?

• They all said it was very good the way we followed it as a narrative as the lyrics were very clear and easy to follow along too.
  
• They also said it gives the effect of following a story book
  

4. Do you think this appeals to a wide target audience?

• Yes it does appeal to a wide target audience as it's very appealing and makes you want to watch more to see what else might happen.
• It's associated with innocence and makes you think of childhood memories

5. Do you think there are any other improvements we could make?

• Make it brighter
• Make sure there are no shadows
  
• More dimensions

They asked to watch it again!